Отзывы к 1 главе фанфика Новая "Нора" (цикл)

krasnozorka Многообещающее начало. Интересно узнать, что же будет дальше и почему старший Малфой так лоялен к Уизли.

*шепотом* вы в слове "пергамент" одну буковку пропустили

Gostya Честно признаюсь, два раза перечитывала первый диалог, но все равно не вникла ху из ху. Плюнула и продолжила читать. Вот тогда все стало на свои места.
Мило, но мало.
План новой "Норы".Интригует. ;) Продку в студию!

Аноним Мухаха!)) жду, жду, жду, чтож там, в норе то бишь, люц натворит

Леди Джейн Грэй Хочу ещё=)))

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